I recently received the following comment on my Facebook page. I’ve received so many atrociously structured comments like this over the years that I finally just broke down and literally responded with writing advice.
you know, i enjoyed watching your vids, sorta took me back to my university days, and since you have proven that i am a BRILLIANT schizophrenic because God is all in my head and He does wonderful things for me, i’m choosing my awesome psychosis instead of the math and physics that i left behind coz of stress induced mini strokes haha… in the future, try and remember the us Christians don’t worship your intellect the same way you do, and it’s boring after a while, well it was boring long before the video ended, to be more clear… now i think that if you accepted that waves are acting like particles, instead of particles acting like waves, it would help you realize the interconnectedness of ‘STUFF’ and that there is no ’0′ and there is no ’1′ to evidence your mathematics on… kinda like your ooozy example, but not really :P and ‘faith’ is not believing in spite of a lack of evidence, faith is simply getting into agreement with God, surfing His waves instead of colliding with them and making them appear as if they never existed, you remember grade school mechanics and wave motion right? there is no hell, stop it with that shit… it doesn’t take much research at all to figure out there is no hell, about 15 minutes into the meanings of the original words in the Bible… and it also doesn’t take a genius to realize that the lake of fire is a metaphor for God’s purifying coolness and that it would be considered a good thing in the end… and who gives a rat’s butt if the Bible is a crazy book, it’s the one God likes to quote, and you just have to deal with it, it’s God’s word because He uses it, not because He freakin’ WROTE IT, how is it possible that you were such a stupid Christian and now you’re so smart as an atheist, hmmm? what a miraculous transformation, indeed, something from nothing haha… i wrote you on youtube, about some books by a guy named ‘Wink’.. they are about ‘the powers’.. ie, angels and demons etc… they are metaphor in the Bible, but still real, they are the psychic portion, the ‘spiritual’ energy of people, organizations, countries… and we personify this energy usually, or some of us do… some just say ‘bad vibes dude’…. but anyway, is it possible that God is the spiritual outcropping of the universes? instead of the universes being a outcropping of God? and does it really matter which is true? maybe it does, we don’t know yet haha… even if God comes from us, the universe and everything, does it really make Him any less real? it’s your choice, you seem very attached to the trend of appearing to be clever as an atheist, but how stupid is it to not learn how to get in line with the ultimate power of the universe?
and gosh did you make me mad when you somehow separated God and truth, and set off to find the truth like a true dumbass who figured he could reason it out when everybody else EVER has failed… don’t worry, i still search for the truth, that’s what it’s all about right, but when it’s promised that we will know the truth, well the truth is a person, not something arrived at be rules of logic/linguistics, etc as fun as those are… God said ‘come let us reason together’ i would take Him up on that invite, coz you’re not doing all that great on yer own :P
Please reacquaint yourself with 10th-grade level punctuation as well as sentence and paragraph structure conventions. Your prose is painful to look at, let alone attempt to read.
Here is a page on how to structure sentences. You’ll want to pay close attention to the sections on “Run-on sentences” and “Rambling sentences” near the bottom, because you are doing a lot of those:
Here is a page on how to structure paragraphs. One idea per paragraph, unity, coherence, logical bridges: all great stuff. Pay close attention to the section on “How do I know when to start a new paragraph?”. You definitely aren’t getting that one quite right: